Thursday, October 29, 2009

The Tale of the Red Eyes

Just like every other night after finishing my post for the next day, I headed off to bed. I walked by Jeff, who was playing World of Warcraft at the kitchen table, and kissed him on the top of the head.

"Going to bed?" he asked.

"Yeah. Are you coming soon?" I questioned.

"Yup. Yup. Oh man, those mother 'effers. What? Yeah, I be there soon," he answered.

Talking to Jeff while he is mid game is always interesting. He is usually only half paying attention to me. But I am used to it. I knew his love of all things video game before I married him.

I kissed him once again on the head and said, "Please don't stay up too late". And I went off to bed.

Once my nightly ritual was complete I settled under the covers to doze until Jeff came in. One of the side effects of being married is that sometimes I can't fail asleep if Jeff is not in bed with me. This happened to be one of those nights.

I let my mind wonder and hoped that sleep would come, even though Jeff was not in the bed. But then I heard it the distinctive sound of Jeff pushing his chair away from the table. "Yeah," I thought to myself, "Sweet sleep will finally come to me."

I felt a presence in the room and just assumed it was Jeff, emptying his pockets of his wallet, phone and keys and getting undressed.

The whole time he was doing this, I felt his stare on my back. I could just feel his eyes boring into my back. It was not his normal behavior but sometimes, Jeff can be weird.

But this time, it was creeping me out. I felt very uncomfortable and I just wanted him to hurry up and come to bed so that I could go to sleep.

But he still didn't come. He just seemed to be standing there staring at me. I could feel his eyes on my back. He was totally giving me the chills.

This was getting ridiculous. What in the world was he doing that was taking so long? And why was he staring at me?

"Jeff! What are you doing?!" I said in a huff as I turned over onto my other side to face his side of the room.

Once I was on that side, I stopped short. For I did not see what I expected. I thought that Jeff would be right there, standing next to the bed. I felt his presence in the room. I felt his eyes on my back. But the room was dark. The door was closed and there was no one there.

"Jeff?" I said again, just in case he was hiding at the edge of the bed and at any moment going to jump up and scare the crap out of me.

"Jeff?" I said again. My heart was now starting to race. I looked at the door and saw the glow of the kitchen light still on. Jeff was not in the room with me that was for sure. But who was in the room. I could still feel someone there.

I looked around the dark room as best I could.

I was now sitting straight up in bed. My heart was beating so fast that I thought at any moment it would leap out of my throat.

I did not see anyone in the room with me but I still felt eyes boring into me. I was scared stiff. I wanted to run out of the room. I wanted to scream at the top of my lungs. But, nothing. I was unable to do anything.

Then as I sat there my eyes were pulled to the corner of the room by the door. And it was there that I saw two glowing red dots... eyes, staring right at me.


I could not move. It was as if those eyes held me in place. The only thing that I could do was blink and when I did, the eyes were gone.

I felt alone in the room for the first time since I got into bed.

I ripped the covers off my body and bolted out of bed like a cat with its tale on fire. I ripped the door open and I burst into the kitchen. Jeff was sitting at the table playing his game, completely unaware of what just happened to me.

He paused for a moment and gave me a confused look, questioning the commotion that I just caused as I entered the kitchen.

"What?" I said to him. "I just remember I had to check my email one more time."

There was no way I was going to tell him what just happened. I was not even sure what just happened and I still don't know.


This post has been a part of Spooky Writer's Workshop
It was also inspired by this blogger and this post.
Happy Halloween.

30 comments:

Erin said...

OMG that creeped me out as I stand alone, in my kitchen, at almost midnight! And I'm supposed to go to sleep? haha

BJ_Mama said...

CREEPY!! You had me at the edge of my seat!

Anonymous said...

Creepy! Ugh...shouldn't have read that just before I head to bed alone, as my DH is staying up playing Oblivion, lol.

Karen and Gerard said...

Very spooky and strange! Maybe you were asleep after all and dreaming?

cat said...

Great creepy story girl! Got goosebumps all over me.

Anonymous said...

I've had that happen. I'm half asleep and I hear something, a sound attached to something familiar. I start, wake fully up-excpet I tell my husband and he thinks I'm a nut. I don't mind. At least I'm a secure nut!

BBB said...

Thank you JESUS I read this in the morning and not last night before trying to go to sleep.

Trac~ said...

WOW very spooky! I don't blame you for not telling Jeff - I wouldn't have told my hubby either! HA!

Susie said...

Very scary! I hate it when stuff like that happens!

rachel... said...

Perfect tale for Halloween!

So many times, I've been sleeping and all of a sudden feel someone staring at me. I am almost afraid to open my eyes, but as I do, I see a figure looming over me next to the bed! A small-ish jammie-clad figure just standing there staring at me! Why do kids DO that???

MIITB said...

OMG creeeeeeeppppppyyyyyyy!!!!! And red eyes too?!@?! Holy crap.

hahahaha, thanks for linking up to me. I finally saw paranormal activity the other day (which i thought minus a few parts was totally lame) but there is a ouija board scene in it, and I am so thankful at least THAT didn't happen :)

Emily said...

Ok, that is seriously creeping me out! What were those red eyes??

Emmy said...

You made my heart race! Eric sometimes has to travel and those nights he is gone I swear every little noise sounds freaky.

Crista said...

Creepy!! You gave me goose bumps!

CaraBee said...

Super creepy!! I love ghost stories!

Anonymous said...

Holy crap! That's scary! (And I have a World of Warcraft playing husband, too! ;)

Anonymous said...

Very creepy.

I really thought it was going to end with a small child staring at you (which happends in my house).

Happy Halloween.

Alicia said...

ahhh! CREEPY!!!! that kind of stuff creeeeeps me out! it gave me chills just reading it!

Nicole @ WhenDidIBecomeMyMom.com said...

That sh*t is creepy. If you're going to post any follow ups advertise the heck out of it so I don't read it.

I'm going to go back to happy ignorance and assume that you made this up, and you're a great writer.

Good bye! :-)

Lollidale Farm said...

That is SO creepy scary! I also thought that it might have been one of the kids.

Very captivating story, I must say!

KatBouska said...

Eek! Sounds like someone needs more sleep!

Anonymous said...

YIIP! Not cool. . .I kept thinking it was gonna end up being one of your kids, too. CREEPY!

Until the last bit you had me going, I'm going to assume that these events did NOT happen to you, and rest easily tonight.

Liz Mays said...

What the heck? I wonder if you were half asleep at first. That's spooky!

CC said...

eek gads! Stop scaring me!!!

Up until the red eyes, I was relating to you a lot. I typically end up in bed 4+ hours before my husband and I used to have a hard time falling asleep. But now I'm so used to it, I can't fall asleep when he's in bed!

Connie said...

First of all. You described most nights at my house....World of Warcraft, distracted hubby and going to bed alone.

The Eyes...freakin me out!!

Vicki said...

Gawd that is C.R.E.E.P.Y!

wife.mom.nurse said...

oh my gosh...you totally creeped me out! Seriously!!!

(That's some writing girl!)

Honey Mommy said...

That is totally creepy! I hate the feeling of being watched!

LazyCrazyMama said...

LOL!! Creepy!

Michelle said...

My hubby plays WOW too. Something similar happened to me. I didn't see anything just felt a presence. Luckily it hasn't happened again because it freaked me out!