Thursday, November 12, 2009

And the Saga Continues

The hum and buzz outside the window made me pause as I was ripped back to that time in the attic. I thought for sure that I would be taken and never see Davin again. My memory is not the best when it comes to recalling all the events, in fact most of it is blank. But the sound of the Machines will forever be locked into my memory.

I also remember the fear and panic that seized my body. I thought that this was the end. Davin and I would forever be separated. Our lives torn apart once again. If I was to be captured my memories would be terminated and nothing, would be able to bring them back. Davin would no longer exist to me. The baby would have never been given life.

My gaze went down to our sleeping infant. She was so peaceful and innocent. It is my hope that she never know the Machines. It is my hope that she will never know the horror and pain that they cause. It is my hope that she will never know where her mother and father came from. It is my hope that we, I, can protect her with every fiber of my being, even my life if it comes to that.

So far we have been successful. No one knew that she even existed. She was our secret, our precious gift. Life now seemed almost, normal. We had put down roots in this small out of the way town. We were just another young couple with a small infant. He was a plumber and I was a school teacher. We were just a normal couple. No one thought anything different, there wasn't any reason too.

But in the back of my mind, I wondered how long this would last? How long would we be able to live in peace, away from their grasp and control? How long would Davin and I be able to love each other?

The ringing phone caused the baby to stir. I raced over to pick it up. I was ready to quietly say 'hello' but stopped short. Davin had already picked it up. He must have came home for lunch.

I did not recognize the voice on the other end but I figured it was just a client. Davin sometimes, although very rare because we really liked no depended on our privacy, gave out our personal phone number. I pulled the phone away from my ear to hang it up when the conversation registered in my brain.

"I know the baby has been born," the voice hissed.

My hear began to race as I looked down at our sleeping daughter. She was so peaceful and safe swaddled in her pink blanket. I could feel the panic rise in my chest. My hand began to shake the I feared I would drop the receiver. The voice continued as I listened.

"You promised to hand her over as she was born. Jen was never suppose to know that the baby was alive. We let you escape. We let you love. We kept up our end of the deal, even more. We let you live. Now it is your turn. The baby. It is ours." The voice demanded with an almost snake like tongue.

"I understand." I heard Davin say. My hand was shaking so badly that I dropped the receiver. It hit the wooden floor with a loud clunk that seemed to echo through the room.

I was frozen. I couldn't believe what I was hearing. Davin had just given our baby to someone. No, not someone, the Machines. They had found us. Our time of peace was over. They knew. And worst of all they knew because Davin had told them. Davin.

I heard footsteps on the stairs and I knew that Davin would come through the door at any second. I tore the sleeping baby out of her cradle and held her tightly to my chest. I grabbed the gun that Davin kept hidden under the cradle. I had no idea what I was going to do with the gun. I knew that I would not be able to kill Davin but I could not let him or the Machine's take my baby.

I had no plan. I didn't know what my next move was but I held my ground as Davin bounded into the room and stopped short. His eyes met mine and questioned me as they were followed my out stretched arm to the gun.

He placed his hands in the air as I aimed the barrel at his chest. "Jen, What is going on?" He asked with a nervous laugh. His voice, nor his eyes, give anything away. It was like the whole phone call had not happened.



This post was part of Writer's Workshop hosted by Mama Kat.
This is fiction. Sometimes, I like to write stories.
See, I dream about these stories and I decided to write them down and see what happens.

27 comments:

Farmers Wifey said...

I love the way you write...and your imagination...very dramatic!

Melissa aka Equidae said...

wow that was some story! loved it!

Justine said...

Whoa, this was totally intense! I wasn't sure if I was reading fact or fiction! Whew, glad it was the latter!

over from Mama Kat's!

Justine :o )

Jennifer said...

Wow! Very gripping! I enjoyed reading this!

~ Jennifer
http://thetoyboxyears.blogspot.com

Kristin said...

You have got some great writing. Loved reading that. Thanks.

Kristin said...

You have got some great writing. Loved reading that. Thanks.

Lollidale Farm said...

Totally intense! You had me going there for a while, wondering who these people were and WHO this little baby was! I was glad to get to the end and find out it was fictional!

cat said...

Oh great! I remember part 1.

Emmy said...

Oh very exciting!! What is the machine??? I am so intrigued, I hope you write more.

Emily said...

WOw...you've got talent girl! great story.

Sera said...

AWESOME! I'm reading it and constantly scratching my head, going WHAT in the HECK did I miss? Thinking I missed some pivotal post or something. It was just so intense, so let me tell you how relieved I was it was fiction. :) You have got some MAD writing skills woman!

Liz Mays said...

I'm SO glad that was fiction. I was wondering for a while!

Susie said...

Ok...when are you going to be published?

Anonymous said...

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?????!!!!

Anonymous said...

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?????!!!!

Connie said...

Oh my heck! Love these stories!

Anonymous said...

I was confused for a second, lol, but this definitely kept me at the edge of my seat. It was creepy! What comes next?

Sara @ Domestically Challenged said...

Awesome! You had me very captivated! You always have a great writing style.

Otter Thomas said...

Great story. I just watched Terminator Salvation last week so I was really into the machines wreaking havoc and all that.

Nicole @ WhenDidIBecomeMyMom.com said...

You are goooooood! And I thought the red eyes halloween story was good! Ooooh u'd be fun to go camping with!

Helene said...

At first, I thought this was a real story!! Wow! You have such a way with words! I hope you'll continue to write!!!!

stephanie said...

goodness! i'm reading this thinking, this can't possibly be real... but then again, its not like i really know you even though i stalk your blog.

great story telling.

Mayhem and Moxie said...

This is amazing, Jen. I loved seeing you do something different on your blog. Wonderful of you to share your writing talent in a different way with the rest of us.

You know, you've just whetted our appetite though, right?

MIITB said...

I love this story! I am so glad you continued it and I hope the next installment is coming soon. Great job!!

Kelly Deneen Raymond said...

That was totally intense!! I hope you keep telling this story!!!

Unknown said...

you sure know how to keep us on the edge of our seats! reading this reminds me of the video of my favorite 80s song...Aha's "Take on Me" do you remember that one? The diner, the comic book, the chase? intense!

Honey Mommy said...

Great story! I totally had to go read the first part because it missed it somehow!